User:Smcc24/Dietary management of Parkinson's disease/Magattab Peer Review

General info
Smcc24
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Smcc24/Dietary management of Parkinson's disease
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Dietary management of Parkinson's disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
The reordering made the information much more clear. Good job on recognizing misinformation and non-Wikipedia approved use of source information. The last section discussing dairy products as having a negative effect may benefit from a more general transition sentence introducing the idea there are diet patterns that are negative, and then present information about diary products (which could also use a few more neuro details).