User:Smcoulter/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Casper (cat)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because I wanted to do an article that was interesting and fun to read.

Evaluate the article
This article has many strengths. It is an article about the cat Casper and how he came about riding buses. I like that it is fun and light hearted, even thought Casper eventually dies. The article can be improved by giving more explanation about BBC news, it seemed like an exciting interview about Casper but not much detail was provided. This article is very underdeveloped. Even though it is a sweet article there is much more information about Casper that could’ve been provided.