User:Smcoulter/Royal St./Miss.Anieya Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(User:Smcoulter/Royal St.)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Smcoulter/Royal St.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Smcoulter/Royal St.

Evaluate the drafted changes
The structure of everything looks pretty good, the portion labeled safety might need a little more information. Also there aren't any pictures or an infobox. The introduction was pretty good but it needs to be more neutral in opinion. Moving into the safety potion this also needs to be more neutral and include more information. Such as the statistics of crime, examples of the highest crimes committed, and maybe what the city is trying to do to prevent crime on this street. The section for places to visit is worded very well but capitalization in some places should be fixed. Maybe you can explain why water must be brought into the city instead of expressing your opinion to bring it. Instead of labeling it fun history maybe you can just label it History. Lastly I would just say to include more in the safety potion, add an infobox, pictures, and fix some capitalization. Overall it is constructed very well.