User:Smcoulter/Royal Street/Cerealmcmilk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smcoulter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Smcoulter/Royal Street
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Royal Street, New Orleans

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead to this article is very lengthy, containing all the information about the topic. It begins very abruptly,  without pertaining information about its general location. Although, it describes the subject of the article. Royal street, all the information is thrown together. The is no content as the article is lacking subtopics. I would strongly suggest picking up your lead and separating the information while elaborating on it as well. The overall tone is very neutral but rushed. The article is not fully developed, but the lead given would definitely be better if you refer to what I previously said. Continue to work on your article, adding subtopics, sources, a table of context, and images as well so this can be a well-developed Wiki article.