User:Smcoulter/Royal Street/Raegannicoleee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smcoulter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Smcoulter/Royal Street


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that your article is starting nicely. You should make the article into different sections that way it is easier to read. A large paragraphed article makes it difficult to find information throughout the article as well as it takes the interest away from the article and makes it less likely to be read. Also try to add pictures to capture the interest of readers and to give the article some more "flavor".