User:Smd575/United States declaration of war on Japan/Christian.Moreno44 Peer Review

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This was an interesting piece, something that is very important on American history and politics. Something I would add would be to go into more detail with certain aspects of the bombing of Pearl Harbor and why the U.S. took the approach they did. Another thing I would add is to add excerpts of the Roosevelt speech that were of importance to the declaration of war and specific details entailing what Roosevelt wanted to do in terms of war and how they were going t0 attack Japan.

-This is a great idea. I think adding more info on this would definitely give needed context to the reader. Lola Frenkel

These are great insights and align with a lot of the ideas I have had for additions to this article. I wanted to focus on Roosevelt's speech and its importance previously, but adding aspects of the U.S. approach to Pearl Harbor and excerpts from the speech are great additions that I had not considered.