User:Smd575/United States declaration of war on Japan/Graceriverssss Peer Review

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smd575 (Top paragraph on draft. starting with "The United Kingdom"
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I like the idea of bringing in that source- I would also say in that section you could add a little history or the background of the British and United States, talking about their association and alliance. Because it almost feels random when it suddenly brings up Britain, as it was not mentioned in the above paragraphs.

- This is a great idea. We will be sure to add in more context on the association between Britain and the US. Lola Frenkel

Also right after it says "due to Japanese attacks on the British colonies of Malaya, Singapore, and Hong Kong" add the date and context behind this. Like when these attacks happened and if they timely have anything to do with the current war. It mentions British attacks vaguely and then changes conversation but I think these attacks are important backstory and should have more information considering it was a large part for why The United Kingdom was involved.""Michael F (peer review response): Thank you for the input we appreciate it!