User:Smdelacruz/Almighty Voice/Im.Hussein Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smdelacruz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Smdelacruz/Almighty_Voice?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The author added great information to the Almighty Voice Wikipedia page. In addition, it is well written and insightful while remaining neutral and engaging. I also really enjoyed the Legacy section that describes the impacts of Almighty Voices resistance.

The author's Early life section was well done and sets up the section on his resistance efforts perfectly. We get to know the ways Almighty was influenced by his relative's and we see how that leads to his efforts against colonialism. The article has some really interesting information regarding his last moments of resistance on Minichinas Hills.

The sources the author uses are very strong. It is a great mix of primary and secondary sources that are unique and insightful. I like how they used both academic sources and archival sources which really add to the quality of the paper.

In my opinion, the article is very well done and provides a lot of valuable information. I do not see any major changes that need to be done. However, if you want any suggestions maybe add links to the art that was inspired by his life.