User:Smdellorso/Peace Adzo Medie/Lexdem2 Peer Review

General info
Smdellorso
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Peace Adzo Medie
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Peace Adzo Medie

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you added a really nice and meaningful contribution to Peace Adzo Medie's page. I would love to see more edits of this nature, that focus on the content of her works. This article seems to be a good start, but could be improved by some more detail. I like the organization of the article, and the way that it is divided into different sections, but feel as though some more sections could be added and more detail could be added to each section. I also feel like the lead could be updated to better reflect her as a person rather than just including her ethnicity and occupation. I also think that an image could improve this piece. Overall, I think that this is a really great start that could benefit from some more detail.