User:Smi02002/Pattrice jones/MegMarie13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pattrice Jones


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Smi02002/Pattrice_jones?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Pattrice jones

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I believe the changes made are very good and add a lot to the article. I think there could be a few more references added to it, but the links that are available provide good secondary sources. There are some capitalization errors at the beginning of sentences.