User:Smi02002/Pattrice jones/Wentl015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smi02002, Piscesproblems10, Zxcvbnm70


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Smi02002/Pattrice_jones?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pattrice jones

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you all have done a great job adding to this article! I like that you added a separate section for "career" and moved the information about the sanctuary to that section. I also think you added a lot of great content about her writing and lecturing. Your content is all relevant and unbiased. The sources you added all appear to be reliable and current and are secondary sources. Great job organizing the article; everything is concise and coherent and I did not notice any grammatical or spelling errors. Great job! (Also, I was so sad to hear about Lou the ox.)