User:Smildmo/Domain (biology)/JR524 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smildmo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Smildmo/Domain (biology)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Domain (biology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The edit is well written and concise, getting down to the point of what would be added into the article. The content was relevant and up to date, and well written considering the sources used, and I thought the sources were also adequate in the situation. It was neutral and easy to read. I thought that as a whole, I do not have very many comments as I thought the piece was very good. The only thing would be perfecting the placement of the addition in order to make sure it flows and make sense in the context of the rest of the wikipedia article.