User:Smirahma/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Achomi Language


 * Article Evaluation
 * It appears incomplete. It does not appear to thoroughly cover the topic at hand and is missing alot of citations. However, the article does appear unbiased and provides a good starting point.


 * Sources
 * Ethnologue. Lari. www.ethnologue.com/language/lrl. Halkias, Daphne, and Christian Adendorff. Governance in Immigrant Family Businesses: Enterprise, Ethnicity and Family Dynamics. Gower, 2014.  Islamic Parliament of Iran. “Constitution.” Islamic Parliament of Iran,  en.parliran.ir/eng/en/Constitution.  Moridi, Behzad, and Muhammed Ourang. “An Analytical Study of Morphological Features and  Considerations of Iranian Endangered Language (Case Study of Nominal System in  Lari).” International Conference on Humanities, Literature and Management  (ICHLM'15), 2015, doi:10.15242/icehm.ed0115115.  Moridi, Behzad. “The Dialects of Lar (The State of Research).” Iran and the Caucasus, vol. 13,  no. 2, 2009, pp. 335–340., doi:10.1163/157338410x12625876281389.  Rahimi, Ali, and Tayebeh Mansoori. “A Study of Personal Pronouns of Larestani as an  Endangered Iranian Language.” 2016, doi:10.13140/RG.2.1.1342.0566.  UNESCO Atlas of the World's Languages in Danger, UNESCO, www.unesco.org/languages-atlas/index.php.  Worrall, James, and Alam Saleh. “Persian Pride and Prejudice: Identity Maintenance and Interest  Calculations among Iranians in the United Arab Emirates.” International Migration  Review, vol. 54, no. 2, 2019, pp. 496–526., doi:10.1177/0197918319860154.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Achomi people


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is a good, concise, well cited, unbiased, brief description of Larestanis. However, it does not go into enough detail and has a lot of potential for improveement.


 * Sources
 * Worrall, James, and Alam Saleh. “Persian Pride and Prejudice: Identity Maintenance and Interest Calculations among Iranians in the United Arab Emirates.” International Migration
 * Moridi, Behzad. “The Dialects of Lar (The State of Research).” Iran and the Caucasus, vol. 13, no. 2, 2009, pp. 335–340., doi:10.1163/157338410x12625876281389.

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Shiraz
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is thoroughly detailed and comprehensive. It has a wide range of sources. It is by far the highest quality source compared to the previous two and doesn't seem to have alot of room for improvement, atleast for the purpose of this assignment
 * The article is thoroughly detailed and comprehensive. It has a wide range of sources. It is by far the highest quality source compared to the previous two and doesn't seem to have alot of room for improvement, atleast for the purpose of this assignment

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Larestan County


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article provides a brief, concise description of Larestan County. However, it could definitely benefit from more information. Also, it could be altered grammatically to make it more concise! Potential additions: talking about the culture and language of this region
 * Sources
 * Moridi, Behzad. “The Dialects of Lar (The State of Research).” Iran and the Caucasus, vol. 13, no. 2, 2009, pp. 335–340., doi:10.1163/157338410x12625876281389.

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Lar, Iran


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article appears to be very informative, concise and well organized. However, it does need more referencing and sources! It might even benefit from touching on Larestani culture.