User:Smittal9/Romantic orientation/Axelman03 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smittal9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Smittal9/Romantic orientation
 * User:Smittal9/Romantic orientation

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a good start to adding this information to the page, as it does seem that the page is lacking on this information. Its good that its being expanded out. I think that the first 2 sentences though are saying mostly the same thing, and they may be able to be condensed into one sentence. The last sentence added also I think could be reworded. Perhaps the sentence could be started off with "Panromantic is different than pansexual because...".

I think that to expand on this further, it may be good to include more information on the topic. Perhaps you could include more information about the experience, or a sentence providing brief demographics of the topic. It may be good to have a brief overview of the views of the topic, such as what current research says about it. I think that this is a section that could be expanded upon a lot. Perhaps outside the topic of panromanticism on the page, you could discuss other topics about romantic attraction. I especially think current research that discusses what powers romantic attraction within people would be interesting to add. Its not a topic a lot of people understand very well, so it would be great to expand why its separate from sexual attraction, if possible.