User:Smm323/Aztec religion/Nch5719 Peer Review

General info
Smm323, ReyesT2, Karlock
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Smm323/Aztec religion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aztec religion

Evaluate the drafted changes
1. I like your narrow and focused section topics; they will make it easy to improve this article without duplicating existing content.

2. I'm wondering how this article relates to the "Aztec Mythology" article. I haven't taken a close look at the mythology article, but it's possible that some content is duplicated given the similar themes of the two. It might be a good idea to see if any repetitive content could be simplified, rephrased, or removed. This probably shouldn't be a major priority, though, since it's far more important to add missing content and your outline seems to have that covered.

-Similarly, I also noticed that several sections in the article correspond with separate Wikipedia articles (such as human sacrifice). There might be an opportunity to cut down on the content in this article and create a clear summary that guides readers towards the more detailed articles for a deep dive.

-There is a lot of dense content in the "priests and temples" section; maybe you could divide that into sections (with bold-faced headings) that would be less intimidating and easier to understand.

3. I think the proposed section discussing the origins of Aztec religion is a great and necessary addition to the article. The content in the sandbox is limited but I'm sure you'll expand on this later on. The section "Aztec religion outside the empire" is also relevant, though it might be tricky to avoid delving too deeply into other religious traditions (such as the Hopi or Pueblos) that might deserve their own separate article. Based on the content in the sandbox, though, it seems you stay connected to the Aztec subject

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