User:Smolpotato2000/sandbox

Welcome to my page. My name is Alyssa Im, I’m 17 years old, and I am a freshmen at EVCC. I am majoring in Accounting and bookkeeping. In my spare time, what I like to do is surf on the internet, such as social media, entertainment. Sometimes, I would play games on my phone or read a book. I find these things to be calm and relaxing.

My interests on writing a Wikipedia page about are lifestyles spectrum. I’m mostly interested in doing a page about interior designs, since I like decorating my bedroom with different items and make them cohesive.

= Article Review = This region means a lot to me personally because I've lived in this province since I was born. I've seen most of the pages about the provinces in Cambodia on Wikipedia have something in common: the shortage of information on the page. I'd visited the Kampong Cham page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects worth commenting on: update of the links, citations on the page, and the sculpture that represent what the place is known for. So, to see its Wikipedia page not thorough, I'm a little disappoint.

Outdated Links
Some of the links lead to the Wayback Machine, which indicates that the pages are no longer existed on the Internet. And since the page is out-of-date, they hardly contain any data. I like to see up to date links that have a clear explanation on the information on what it's providing to the readers.

Sculpture
The last thing the page did not mention is the statue that represents the province " នាគព័ន្". I don't see anything about the statue stated in the article. Every province have a figure to represent what's the region is known for. This is important to every province because it's the first thing everyone are going to see when they enter Kampong Cham.

Summary
Overall, the page itself seems pretty good to me. Due to the reasons above, I would like to see some improvements on the suggestions I'd provided. The page has some information that are up to date and nicely detailed, but not quite enough. The suggestions above should be easy to edit in. I felt the page is not complete without the statue being mention, so I added it in since it advance a better understanding of the page for the viewers.

(Link to the description about the sculpture in the Etymology section, last sentence "Here")