User:Smoothieaficionado/Red velvet cake/FrioUverd Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smoothieaficionado


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 * Red velvet cake
 * Red velvet cake

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the connection that you made with Black Foodways and Red Velvet Cake. Researching its ties to black culture further proved the significance of red velvet cake. Ultimately this article shows how food is an integral part of culture as it can operate as asymbolic medium and unite people together.

I would try to format the grammar of your section and change the tone of the passage to be active instead of passive.

Your sources are recent which is good, but you might want to double check if they have been peer reviewed. I know that even though "Adventures in Taste and Time" is a blog, it is written by Helena who graduated with a degree that focused "[in] part hands-on food exploration and part cultural and historical food research." Overall, great work!