User:Smoothieaficionado/Red velvet cake/Wikiguy2003 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SmoothieAficionado


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 * Red velvet cake
 * Red velvet cake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Well done. The introductory synopsis is well done and to the point. The history section is extremely comprehensive. I think you should add another subtitle named 'preparation'. It seems like that was intertwined with history, and in a Wikipedia article it could be valuable separated for the reader.

Furthermore, I would be interested in seeing the difference visually between the cocoa vs. chocolate versions.

The details you included were very interesting. I was unaware how complex this food was.