User:Snazzyricotta/Ottoman illumination/Immenseseagull Peer Review

General info
snazzyricotta
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ottoman illumination

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is organized really well and I feel like every item of discussion is under the correct heading. The content is also clearly written and follows a distinct chronological pattern that allows for ease of reading. All of the references are correct and all the links work (except for one red link in the first attached image). My only notes would be as follows. Under the "History" section, I would clarify the time period during which Sultan Suleiman reigned. This will help anchor readers in a time period like the other sections. Also add Wikipedia links to as many dynasties and sultanates as possible so the reader can familiarize themself with them. Lastly, I would just confirm that all of your images are designated for public use (idk about the ones from Bibliothèque Nationale de France). Overall, I felt like you re-organized this page in a really effective way. Compared to the old page, this version is far easier to follow and separates the content in a digestible format. Good job!