User:Snazzysugarplum/Violence and intersectionality/KCterm Peer Review

General info
Snazzysugarplum & Tarabien
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Snazzysugarplum/Violence_and_intersectionality?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Violence and intersectionality

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! I was looking at your sandbox draft, but I don't see anything there. I'm not sure if it's a mistake on my end, or if you have the information uploaded somewhere else? Please let me know, I'm very interested on the topic you both have picked. I saw in your bibliography that you have an article linked by Crenshaw, Kimberle (2017). I think it's a really interesting interview that could provide a lot of insight for the topic you chose. I did see, after reading the original article, that someone had mentioned Kimberle Crenshaw and her theories/works on intersectionality. I also saw in the original article that there is a section labeled "Current statistics". I was thinking that maybe in this section, you both could add some updated statistics. I saw that a lot of the sources were from 2016. Also, there could be some more current information on how stereotypes are used as a justification for violence listed under that tab in the article. I hope what I wrote helps, and I'm looking forward to see what you have planned!