User:Snfi224/Studio Ghibli/CLS1111 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Snfi224


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Studio Ghibli


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Studio Ghibli

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead paragraph is very strong and detailed. It sets up very nicely the rest of the article. There are a few things that are not listed in the intro that are brought up later so those elements might be included in there to let the reader know what content is contained in the article. All content and resources seem to be up to date. The only one that could use a second look would be the streaming services and where Ghibli films are available. The tone is very neutral throughout so that was very well crafted. The setup was very clear and it followed a very clear path from start to finish. It never confused me about the flow in the sense that everything that followed after its predeceasing content made sense for it to be there. All in all, this is a very well put together article.