User:Snoodle17/The Yellow Wallpaper (film)/TheCrystalHermitCrab Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

To start off this peer review, I would like to say this article has a lot of great information. All the sources seem credible and you can tell time and effort was spent researching for all the write information. With that being said, there are a few things I believe can be changed to benefit this page. To start off, there isn't to much of an opener. You should start off telling what the Yellow Wallpaper is and then begin to tell about how it was made into a film. The way it started currently make it seem kind of random and that information is just started with to beginning.

Secondly, there were some places that still said "citation needed" that could be fixed. There were also some places that could use citation and fact checks as well. These all being within the "production" section. Other than that the article is well written and with minor editing should turn out amazing.