User:Snow298/Thiamine monophosphate/LemonLimeHerbal Peer Review

General info
Snow298
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Thiamine_monophosphate&diff=1222157151&oldid=1076042683#cite_note-9
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Thiamine monophosphate

Evaluate the drafted changes
The contents being added are in a neutral tone. Also, the sources of materials are from scientific journals and peer-reviewed. This means that the sources are reliable. Lastly, the contents are written in a clear and easily understandable tone, and are added into the Wikipedia article in an organize manner.