User:Snowboarder888/Virgin Atlantic/Guilford 34 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Snowboarder888


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Snowboarder888/Virgin_Atlantic?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template



''' In the article, the lead is used to introduce the company Virgin Atlantic as a British airline and its place of operation. Since there is plenty of information in the lead, there has not been anything updated by my peer because adding to this section would clutter the article. The information currently in the lead outlines the company's history, competitors, current news events, and other relevant topics. While the article's lead provides an outline, the information is still very broad, therefore, it includes all the information later on in the article. Overall the lead in this article does a good job of presenting the company. '''


 *  The article uses many sections to explain Virgin Atlantic airlines. Therefore, it is difficult to find a unique topic that was not previously mentioned. Although in my peer's addition, they were able to add a current piece of information about a new airplane that emits less carbon into the atmosphere. This information seems to pass Wikipedia’s non-bias standards as well as creating an even balance of viewpoints. The addition also maintains a good structure within the article that is easy to follow. The content added by my peer is both important and useful to the public despite the lack of mentioning Wikipedia's equity gaps. 

''' Upon examination of my peer's sources, they all seem up to date and reliable, along with proper citation format for Wikipedia's standards. All sources are from around 2018, which ensures accurate data on the company, along with the sources being peer reviewed and unpersuasive. The article's sources, although could use a bit of an increase in diversity as most of the sources used are aimed at only greenhouse emissions and nothing else. Despite this slight bump, the article seems to have proper sources. '''


 *  Overall the addition to the article appears to be heading in the right direction. The information added seems relevant and beneficial to the current status of Virgin Atlantic Airlines. The strengths of this addition are the specific details of what the company is doing to become more sustainable. In order to further develop this article it would be helpful to add how the airline industry is affecting global warming in general in order to compare the specific company to a general problem. 

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