User:Snqadri/Bulimia nervosa/Aford4706 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Snqadri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Snqadri/Bulimia nervosa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bulimia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Finding the edits made was somewhat difficult, with how much of the original article was transferred over. I would suggest culling some of the article that edits were not made to and or making the edits you did make stand out more by underlining or putting in bold.
 * There seem to be a lack of in text citations made to the edits that you added.
 * The articles seems to lack information about the demographics that are affected by bulimia, which may be worth finding data on and updated the article with.
 * You may want to separate the symptoms into subtypes, such as "behavioral" "cognitive" "medical" etc.
 * I'm confused by your reference section in the article draft. I'm unsure as to which of these references are added and used by you, and which ones are coming from the original article.