User:Snqadri/Bulimia nervosa/Hannahchaise Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Snqadri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Snqadri/Bulimia_nervosa?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bulimia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead includes and introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the articles topic.
 * Could be overly detailed, but highlights important facts not found throughout the article.
 * The content that has been added is very relevant to the topic, though the instructor commented that secondary peer reviewed literatures are encouraged. I do not know if this has been changed or not.
 * All of the content is neutral, and no claims appear to be heavily biased towards a particular position.
 * The sources are current, good job correcting and fixing an outdated source!
 * Content is very well written.