User:Snqadri/Bulimia nervosa/Sfatima 12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Snqadri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Snqadri/Bulimia nervosa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bulimia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Nice job in examining and noting down the things that need to be fixed and addressed.
 * I would go a head an make a few changes to my article at this point of our assignment.
 * I would also look more into the type of sources: are they primary, secondary, or the information is from another website?
 * I clicked on one of the sources and it is not directing me anywhere. The best solution would be finding another reliable secondary source presenting the same information and add that into the draft.
 * It would be way easier if you go section by section since you already know what type of edits you are making.
 * I like the visualization aspect in your article.