User:Snsmit14/Textile design/Gbalic Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Snsmit14, Mmmart56, Jtknott


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Textile design - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Textile design - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction is a good overview of what textile design is, it can be added upon depending on the sources that you have access to. It's brief and gets straight to the point.

The content of this article is relevant and detailed when it comes to the processes of textile design. What can be added to this article is the history of textile design, where it originated, and how it evolved throughout the years and throughout the world. The content is very factual and doesn't include any opinionated statements, which should be consistent all throught the article.

The article has a good foundation but can still improve with more diverse content.