User:Snsmit14/Textile design/KaitlynKropf1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Within the last paragraph of Printed Textile Design maybe consider explaining more on why printed textiles are so sustainable, there has been little to explain exactly why this practice is sustainable.

Explain more in detail what a houndstooth and herringbone pattern is within the woven textile design section.

Maybe link the word myriad stitches in the second paragraph of mixed media textile design to give more context of the word.

More information can be added to environmental impact section. Go into detail on elements explained in the first paragraph ex. "production of cloth from raw material" - possibly make a paragraph out of each of these environmental impacts that textiles have on the planet.

images selected are good, maybe add more since this is such as visual section of art