User:Snsmit14/Textile design/S1happy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

snsmit14


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Snsmit14/Textile design
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Snsmit14/Textile_design/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Textile design

Textile Design Article Review
''Unfortunately I do not see anything on the links (neither in the bibliography or sandbox) so I cannot comment much on anything you have written. If you wrote the article for scratch then great job, you did a lot of writing!''

I did take time to read the textile design wiki page, after reading the article and I think there is a lot you can add/reformat.


 * 1) You can talk about the differences between residential and commercial fabrics and different ratings for fabrics and why they are important. I would specifically take a moment to take about fire safety and why some fabrics are more flame resistant than others.
 * 2) You can go into differences between natural or synthetic fabrics and how that effects textile design.
 * 3) The Environmental Impact section can probably be worked on to include more information about the impact that interior design has had. Maybe a few more sentences/information about sustainability.
 * 4) The  "See Also" section is a great idea but I think more can be added.
 * 5) I think some dates or a timeline would be nice for someone who knew absolutely nothing about fabrics. Maybe touch on the changes seen in textile design from industrialization.

I think overall the article feels kind of dense, like there is almost too much and too little of explanation.

Example from The Printed Textile Design section (paragraph 2)

"There are numerous established and enduring printed styles and designs that can be broken down into four major categories: floral, geometric, world cultures, and conversational."

This can be reworded to:

"Although there are many types of printed styles, the designs can be broken down into four categories: floral, geometric, word cultures and conversational."

Also the article says that Reference #4 is missing. If it isn't an article you added maybe try to find a replacement article or take the section of writing/reference out.

Hope this was helpful!