User:Snw19/Crystal Lake (Vilas County, Wisconsin)/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Sierra,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 506...cutting it close I see. You have 5 refs(3 scientific articles and 2 books). Make sure to get 8/10 scientific articles. I'm sure this will be fine as you add your current research paragraphs.

My first comment is you need to split your intro info from your current research info. When you go to add tot he already existing page you will the first two paragraphs at the top and the third in another subsection for current research.

As for the intro it is formatted beautifully. I love the amount of links you have to other scientific words that have wiki pages! You last few sentences about the plants existing in the lake honestly you can put under its own section and in hope someone will come along to fill it out more in the future. You could also do the same with geo paragraph that follows it. Great information!

Your last paragraph is great start to your 4 current research paragraphs. Overall this page is one of the best I have read, there definitely some blatant grammatical errors that need fixed but your wording/linking is perfect for the wikipedia writing style. Well done!

-Katie

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