User:So.Kim, future UCSF PharmD/sandbox

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From 2015-2017, approximately 73.3 million abortions occurred worldwide each year. Furthermore, data from 2010-2014 showed that around 45% of these abortions were unsafe abortions, where most of these unsafe abortions occurred in developing countries. In particular, it was estimated that over 50% of the unsafe abortions occurred in Asia, especially in south and central Asia. Global data from a 2008 systematic analysis also estimated that complications from unsafe abortions accounted for 13% of all maternal deaths. In a retrospective case study, it was found that the mortality associated with septic abortion was approximately 19%; however a systematic review of global data is still needed.

Septic abortion is of highest prevalence in vulnerable populations living in resource-poor environments, with prevalence reaching as high as 86%. Societies with high fertility rate, low contraceptive usage, and legal obstacles to safe termination of pregnancy" predisposes the society to a higher prevalence of septic abortion. The incidence of septic abortion is highest among teenagers, and in areas with restrictive abortion laws due to a higher utilization of illicit abortion procedures carried out by non-doctors due to the inherent barriers in obtaining abortion. Septic abortion is of highest prevalence in vulnerable populations living in resource-poor environments, with prevalence reaching as high as 86% . Societies with high fertility rate, low contraceptive usage, and legal obstacles to safe termination of pregnancy " predisposes the society to a higher prevalence of septic abortion. The incidence of septic abortion is highest among teenagers, and in areas with restrictive abortion laws due to a higher utilization of illicit abortion procedures carried out by non-doctors due to the inherent barriers in obtaining abortion.

From 2015-2017, approximately 73.3 million abortions occurred worldwide each year. Furthermore, data from 2010-2014 showed that around 45% of these abortions were unsafe abortions, where most of these unsafe abortions occurred in developing countries. In particular, it was estimated that over 50% of the unsafe abortions occurred in Asia, especially in south and central Asia. Global data from a 2008 systematic analysis also estimated that complications from unsafe abortions accounted for 13% of all maternal deaths. In a retrospective case study, it was found that the mortality associated with septic abortion was approximately 19% ; however a systematic review of global data is still needed.

Septic abortion is of highest prevalence in vulnerable populations living in resource-poor environments, with prevalence reaching as high as 86% in these populations. Societies with high fertility rate, low contraceptive usage, and legal obstacles to safe termination of pregnancy " predisposes the society to a higher prevalence of septic abortion. The incidence of septic abortion is highest among teenagers, and in areas with restrictive abortion laws due to a higher utilization of illicit abortion procedures carried out by non-doctors due to the inherent barriers in obtaining abortion. Yes, the group's edits added many reliable sources that are secondary sources such as review articles and diagnostic criteria guidelines. The group added the prognosis section which is an important piece of information about glomerulation. I also saw that the group added relevant sources for phrases that had sources missing, which added to the validity of the wikipedia article. The lead section is also a good summary that contains condensed information about the content of the subsequent sections. I think the article could be further improved by adding connecting words to make the article flow easier, and also add relevant pictures and links between wikipedia articles to help the readers read and understand glomerulation.

Yes, the group were able to meet some of their goals, including adding further information and additional sources to the presentation section, expanding upon the relation to interstitial cystitis section, and adding missing references for the statements that needed references. In addition, the group was able to add the pathophysiology section and prognosis section. Diagnosis, pictures and risk factors are sections that still need to be added. Nevertheless, the group did a great job improving the article overall.