User:SoAnonymous2023/Media Multiplexity Theory/Adv443 Peer Review

General info
SoAnonymous2023
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:SoAnonymous2023/Media Multiplexity Theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:SoAnonymous2023/Media Multiplexity Theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you have great information and great content for creating a new article page! However, I think your page needs to be broken up into sections. The info you put for defining the theory can be a lead section! Then the five propositions can be separate paragraphs for your article body section.

I believe the reference list is an appropriate size for the amount of sources cited. I also believe the sources are appropriate and relevant to the content. However, a few of the references have red next to them so I think something in them just needs to be fixed.

The article does not contain the necessary section headings, but I think if you do that it will definitely enhance the great information you already have!

One strength of this article is that it is very clear, and concise, and the content is very easy to understand. I can get a good understanding of Media Multiplexity theory from this article. Since its content is understandable, it is less overbearing than other Wikipedia pages that are jampacked with confusing information. Another strength of this article is that is free of grammatical and spelling errors. The content is relevant to the topic, up-to-date, and neutral.

Overall, a great job! Good luck on the rest of your semester!