User:Sobunbunso/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bad Boy (Red Velvet song)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it's one of my favorite songs from this group. This article matters in the sense it gives insight and more details towards a very popular K-Pop song. My initial impression was that it was very detailed but could be organized better.

Evaluate the article
I agree that this article is C-Class. Although the lead contains an introductory sentence that is concise, the rest is overly detailed. It also leaves out a brief description of one of the article's major sections (Music Video). Regarding the content, the article does include relevant topics such as background and release, composition, critical reception, and more. Its last edit was also relatively recent and occurred this past November. The article itself is written in a neutral tone, but most of the criticism cited is positive. One could argue that the viewpoint is overrepresented. Regardless, it is true that it did perform well commercially, and the article did cite music charts. In fact, the article had many references and citations. The majority of links worked and came from valid media sites (Billboard, Dazed, etc). The is well written with only a few grammar mistakes, but some sentences weren't concise. For example, they repeatedly mentioned how the song was a mix of R&B and hip hop in the same section. Overall, I did learn a lot more about the song by reading this article. I enjoyed the different sections and it provided chart rankings to validate what they wrote about its commercial success. However, I do think it could be written more concisely, so that it would be more engaging to read.