User:SoccerTB/Gender pay gap in sports/Jtantillo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) SoccerTB


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SoccerTB/Gender_pay_gap_in_sports?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender pay gap in sports

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) Paragraph kinda makes sense. it also still feels opinion based and that is what the wiki is trying to improve on. I also didn't see a source i'm not sure if it was just because it was in the sandbox.