User:SoccerTB/Gender pay gap in sports/Mmaley2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SoccerTB


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SoccerTB/Gender_pay_gap_in_sports?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender pay gap in sports

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edited content needs a source to back it up, but provides an concise opening for what the article is going to be about. The content is relevant but may contain bias as it poses a question/opinion in it.