User:Sodonn12/Illinois Sports Gambling Law/Ihopper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sodonn12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sodonn12/Illinois_Sports_Gambling_Law?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
In general, the structure of the article is good and easy to read. However, the article could have a stronger lead-in section to provide context for the rest of the article. The last two sentences, with citations 5 and 6, may be better used as a lead-in section. It could be helpful to use that information to provide the reader with the historical context of gambling in Illinois, before discussing the new law passed. However, the main body of the article is well-written and easy to read. The content of the article is neutral and informative, while maintaining a balanced  tone. The sources to the article seem to be current and reliable. However, the actual citations seem to have errors that Wikipedia has flagged. Nonetheless, still a good article.