User:Soft Sweets R/Double skin milk/Jiguguji Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sia and Toby: Double skin milk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Soft%20Sweets%20R/Double_skin_milk?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Double skin milk

Evaluate the drafted changes
They added whole sections about the history of the double skin milk, the ingredient, and even make a specific chart to introduce the recipe of this dish. Furthermore, they added the award that this dish has won. I think adding the citation would make it more perfect.

Evaluating on the checklist:

Everything in the article is relevent to the article topic, nothing distracted me

The tone is neutral

There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented

There is missing some citation and sources' link in the sandbox, there should be added

Existing Sources are neutral