User:Soft Sweets R/Double skin milk/Neruall4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Toby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Soft%20Sweets%20R/Double_skin_milk?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Double skin milk

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content is relevant to the topic, and it provides more detailed information about the topic, such as list out the ingredient and recipe of the double skin milk. And the tone is neutral, the sources is up to dated and reliable, but it can provides some images and media to support the statements. The adding content improve the overall quality of the article, because it provides the relevant award and shops of double skin milk, this makes the article become more complete.