User:Softstarkid/Akatek language/Lramir54 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

The lead is straightforward and informative. Aside from a few terms that are biased such as the word “interesting”, the introduction to the article is written well with reliable citations. The lead could introduce more of the other categories to help readers better know what to expect while reading the article.

Content

The content in this article is well-informed about the phonology of the language but there could be other aspects of the language that can be explored a bit more. There could be a category specifically for the history of the Akatek language which will help expand knowledge of different areas of the language. The geography of the language can also be another category that will help explain the different areas or ways this language is spoken. Perhaps also a category of the hardships or neglect this language has dealt with over the years.

Tone and Balance

The article is written in a neutral tone and is creditable. It is written professionally with no incorrections.

Sources and References

The sources and references are all academic sources. However, some are a bit outdated therefore, there can be more exploration with reliable sources that are more recent.

Organization

The organization of the article may focus a bit too much on the phonology portion of the language and can include other factors that can help the article become more well-rounded.

Images and Media

There aren't any images or media aside from the referenced sources. They can attempt to include more visual representations to help bring to mind the importance of this language and its history. This as well as media sources can be included with proper citations.

Overall Impressions

This article is very well researched and has a focus on the phonology of the language which is an important section to document and research so others can understand and learn from. It could focus a bit more on other aspects of the language but overall, the article provides useful information and examples that help explain the uses of phonology in Akatek.