User:Sognjm/Naheda Sahtout/I-Chia Wu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sognjm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Naheda Sahtout
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Major edits:

- in the lead section, it is better to put the link in order. For example, " She is a strong activist who is very experienced as a volunteer working to engage rural communities in STEM education and resettle Syrian Refugees in Canada." It will be better if you put [2][3] instead of other way around.

- overall great summary on all of the section.

Lead:

- great summary on the lead section and you did a great job to maintain neutral voice.

Content:

- I think you can expand more on the disability section, for example, what are some challenge she faced because of her disability? what are some difficulties she had? Did she encounter some non-fair situation (such as not enough founds)?

- I found that she did not have any awards or honors, if she has some, please add them in, it will be better.

Tone and Balance:

- You did a great job to maintain a neutral voice throughout your sections.

Images and media:

- Nice picture of her!

Sources and references:

- Nice amount of references that enhance her and the page's credibility.

Overall impression:

- Overall, it looks like you are pretty much wrote all of thing about her.