User:Sok18/Individual psychology/Kjoi2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sok18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sok18/Individual_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Individual psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

'''This is an interesting topic. However, my initial impression of your contributions is that I still do not have a clear idea of what individual psychology is. I would explore more deeply into what "striving for significance" and "style of life" mean. Since these topics relate to Adlerian psychology, perhaps you could find more sources that explain the different facets of his model of individual psychology. I would model your findings after the section on "The theory of compensation, resignation, and over-compensation". In that particular subsection, the author provides a concise description of each facet; you could also elaborate more on "resignation" since that section does not have as much information as the others. There were also some grammatical errors within the original article that I would revise. If you find more sources to expand your ideas, I believe you can certainly improve this article in a beneficial way.'''