User:Solojake.js/Marcos Chin/Mdiaz100 Peer Review

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Great lead, very short and straight to the point, within one sentence I was able to grasp who your artist is. When you go through you can link those big brand companies that you listed and it'll be even better.

The early life is filled with a lot of good information that will help build the final product. I believe the beginning of the second sentence can be combined with the first so that the year and location of his birth are together. Then you can continue about his actual ethnicity deriving from his parents. Same as my previous comment, you can link these locations with additional wiki articles in your final product.

Your tone is very consistent and moderate throughout the reading, it was neutral. Which is perfect since we don't want to showing any much emotion regardless if its good or bad, so great job remaining neutral throughout the text.

Further readings will come down the line, and so will other references but for the most part the sources you have thus far are sufficient. So once you fining fleshing out those initial three search for some additional sources that you can draw from.

Your organization is also clear so far, for the categories that you split up, try changing the formatting so that they are Headers to make them more visible and so that Wikipedia recognizes it as its own section.

I myself probably won't be able to find any images to use because of copyright and the nature of my artist, I'm not sure if that's the same in your case but I wouldn't worry too much about that.

Overall great job, I can totally see the direction you're heading into and I'm excited to see your final product.

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