User:SomaYukihira21X/Aversive racism/Elliottimani Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SomaYukihira21X


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:SomaYukihira21X/Aversive racism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aversive racism

Evaluate the drafted changes
This user has made great strides to edit the article. They have taken on several edits that may not have been accepted due to the source but they have been relevant content to include. Their writing for the most part is clear to understand but has a few grammatical errors like "subjected to" instead of "subject to" and perhaps a comma missing. There is not a great deal of major edits that have been made but effort was shown. Along with the notes made, I think there could perhaps be some more work done from the existing articles, if they continue to have trouble finding Wikipedia accepted literature.