User:SomaYukihira21X/Aversive racism/Skymcm2015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: SomaYukihira21X


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SomaYukihira21X/Aversive_racism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the proposed changes that you made to your article definitely build on the topic. The content seems to be relevant to the previous information and appears to be a good addition. I like that you differentiated between explicit and implicit racism because it is important to be as detailed as possible when explaining a concept. I think that there is room for improvement here as well. I would like to see more elaboration on the employment injustices and how minorities are still effected by this today. I also think that you could do to have a few more scholarly sources such as peer reviewed articles. I would recommend using a research database like the ones found on the UAB library website. I also think that the introduction section of the article could be a bit more concise and easy to follow. I would look into making sure the definition and the main idea of what aversive racism is really comes through in the beginning. Overall, I think that your ideas have improved the article but that they just need to be expanded upon.