User:Somedaywinter/Paphiopedilum rothschildianum/Ikswokyzsok Peer Review

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(Somedaywinter)
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 * Paphiopedilum rothschildianum:

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead
The introduction seems to be very thorough, if you were going to add a new article body I would suggest touching on what the article body would be about in the introduction as well.

Article body
I believe for the article that you could add a new article body talking about the status of the species and how it is listed as endangered.

You could also add an article body talking about potential predators of the plant.