User:Sonia Grissel Hernandez/Bob marley/Sonia Grissel Hernandez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YWJIR6O9Fztj2bUkl902Es9jzlce0vs7/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=108045614467969862511&rtpof=true&sd=true


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)