User:Soniakilcoyne/Kintsugi/Lauteur02 Peer Review

General info
Soniakilcoyne
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Soniakilcoyne/Kintsugi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kintsugi

Evaluate the drafted changes
Soniakilcoyne has provided some information under the section "Influence on contemporary art, design and culture". It seems Soniakilcoyne is providing context to the theory of Kintsugi when applied in other disciplines: I can see they are drafting an application of the theory of Kintsugi (embracing wear over time) to a method of treating mental illnesses. I think this is relevant because a decent portion of the article describes its philosophy and application in popular media, so it would be useful to explain an application outside of art and design where Kintsugi philosophy is applied. Soniakilcoyne's published content under "Influence on contemporary art, design and culture" provides an analysis of Kintsugi through an artistic lens to describe its meaning common to applications in the arts. This is cited by a source.

I think continuing to build on the new section Soniakilcoyne is drafting about Covid would make the article more complete, because it would include applications of Kintsugi theory outside of popular arts and culture. I would continue to find more examples of this, if Soniakilcoyne were to continue to build further examples beyond the application to Covid and mental health.