User:Soniakilcoyne/Kintsugi/Llgilpin03 Peer Review

General info
soniakilcoyne
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Editing User:Soniakilcoyne/Kintsugi - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kintsugi - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think adding a paragraph or two about Kintsugi's relationship with COVID through a philosophical lens is going to be really interesting. I look forward to reading more about what that looks like.

I noticed that you would like to change some of the language that can be biased. I think that's really important. It might be a little hard considering the topic, but I think it's important to remove any biased language.

I also noticed that some of the sources used in the original article are from blogs, but you mentioned that you wanted to fix that as well. I think finding a good reliable source will greatly improve this article.

While I was reading the original article, I saw the section about Kintsugi and contemporary art didn't have any images. Maybe add an image to that section so readers can see how this technique is used in modern art.