User:SonnieMunroe/Freedom's Journal/Btymoniewicz Peer Review

Peer review
User: SonnieMunroe and link to article: Freedom's Journal

I believe the work done so far has been excellent. There is a neutral tone and the content is concise and relevant. A particular favorite addition was the paragraph under the Background section, for it added further perspective to the purpose of the newspaper. The main edits I would advise is in the Samuel Cornish section, I'd omit that "Samuel Cornish was a founder and coeditor of Freedom's Journal," in the first sentence, for it is redundant with it being mentioned towards the end of the paragraph. Additionally, if possible, add a citation at the end of the Lead paragraph for the information. Lastly, there is a consistency in information of who founded the newspaper, for the Lead states Rev. John Wilk, while the Background section states that it was Peter Williams. Keep up the amazing work! ~